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[Ficlet] Oblivious

  • May. 19th, 2005 at 11:03 AM
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Just something I wrote on the sly this morning, although why it isn't GP when I've been listening to the omg new GP duet, I don't know.

Oblivious
Whistle!, Mizuno/Kazamatsuri
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Sarcasm does not work on Kazamatsuri.

Neither, Mizuno finds, does subtlety.

When he hands Kazamatsuri a towel after a hard practice, Kazamatsuri just grins and says, "Thanks, Mizuno-kun!" When he fills an extra thermos of water just for Kazamatsuri, he just says, "You're the best, Mizuno-kun!" When he goes out of his way to walk Kazamatsuri home, Kazamatsuri just chatters happily and when they get to his apartment, he says, "See you tomorrow, Mizuno-kun!"

When he diffidently asks, "Won't you call me Tatsuya?", Kazamaturi smiles brilliantly and says, "Then you have to call me Shou."

Mizuno thinks, with a certain sense of despair, that he could hand Kazamatsuri a love letter, complete with pink heart stickers,confessing his affections, and Kazamatsuri still wouldn't get it.

And then one day, Shige take things into his own hands, and whispers something in Kazamatsuri's ear.

In the middle of soccer practice, a look of wonder crosses Kazamatsuri's face, and he blurts out, "I like you, too, Mizuno-kun!"

The team cracks up and Mizuno wants to sink into the ground and disappear, but Kazamatsuri is as obliviously happy as ever, and Mizuno smiles at him for a long moment before yelling at the team to get back to work.





go on to [info]lynnmonster's sequel, here!

Comments

[info]svz_insanity wrote:
May. 19th, 2005 04:33 pm (UTC)
Mizuno thinks, with a certain sense of despair, that he could hand Kazamatsuri a love letter, complete with pink heart stickers,confessing his affections, and Kazamatsuri still wouldn't get it.

*laughs* My mental-image maker is having a field day trying to imagine Mizuno handing Shou a pink lover letter with glitter and heart stickers. *loves*
[info]thehoyden wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 09:23 pm (UTC)
Dude, if I had any skill with photoshop (which I emphatically DO NOT), I would love to make a graphic of Mizuno's love letter.

Glad you liked it! More coming!
[info]lynnmonster wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 01:48 am (UTC)
Ooo! Ooo! I love it SO much, I do I do I do.
[info]thehoyden wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 09:23 pm (UTC)
mooooore tonight!
[info]prillalar wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 05:33 am (UTC)
Aw, socute!
[info]thehoyden wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 09:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Hopefully, more tonight! (of a longer and smuttier variety)
[info]kiyoshi_chan wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 05:46 am (UTC)
*snickers* Oh man, this is just great. XD And we all know it would take Shige kicking one or both their butts for Shou to get a clue. He's adorable and probably one of my favourite characters in the series, but... well, yeah. :P

Great job writing them! <3
[info]thehoyden wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 09:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Oh, we all love the oblivious Shou.^^
[info]arctic_dragon wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 07:29 am (UTC)
Poor Mizuno...love with abject humiliation.
But it's sooo...Shou-like...
...and soo very very cute.
Very nice.
^_^
[info]thehoyden wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 09:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Ah, the fun of torturing Mizuno.^^
[info]ex_semishade366 wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 08:45 am (UTC)
That's so cute.
[info]thehoyden wrote:
May. 20th, 2005 09:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[info]ex_mikaii174 wrote:
May. 27th, 2005 01:14 am (UTC)
lol!!! so cute!!! i've recently started re-reading whistle from vol 14 to 24... aah~~~ the cuteness!!!! *grins* you so tottally captured kaza's personality!!! it is sooo cute!! lol!! i really liked this fic <3<3<3
[info]vulpus_mirus wrote:
Jun. 10th, 2005 10:52 pm (UTC)
Ahhh!
Okay, so after I read this and busted out laughing, my roommate looked at me funny... Ahh, I love livejournal. Thank you! ^_^
[info]thehoyden wrote:
Jun. 10th, 2005 10:56 pm (UTC)
Re: Ahhh!
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Parts 2 and 3 are up, too!
[info]loneyaoiwolf wrote:
Jun. 29th, 2005 08:41 pm (UTC)
Wow that was good, me enjoyed! *flies off to read part 2*
[info]mizuki_evilcute wrote:
Jan. 12th, 2008 12:54 pm (UTC)
INCREDIBLE CUTE!!!! ^^

Love it :)